Friday, October 22, 2021

pickled thumb anyone

 

Today I was learning to retell a story.

I enjoyed writing.

I found it challenging to pick my font.

My digital learning object shows that i can write.

Next time I would change background.

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  1. UnknownOctober 25, 2021 at 9:57 AM

    Kia ora Bella,
    My name is Matua Whitu and I am in Room 9 at St Mary’s School in Gisborne.

    Positive I really like the gentle touches of your font and background.
    Helpful Perhaps you could try adding in a picture or short video clip. I could help you if you wanted to.
    Thoughtful The detail in your short story is very gross, great work to deliver that to the reader!



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Thank you for your positive, thoughtful, helpful comments:
Positive - something done well
Thoughtful - a sentence to let me know that you have read, watched or listened to my blog
Helpful - give some ideas for next time or ask a question

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