Friday, September 24, 2021

persuasive goldilocks writing.


Today I was learning to write persuasive writing.

I enjoyed writing.

I found it challenging to not talk.

My digital learning object shows that i can write.

Next time I would change my font.


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  1. IndiaSeptember 24, 2021 at 1:50 PM

    kia ora Bella
    My name is India from saint marys school.
    I really like how you hight lighted your work to show us tht you achieved your success criteria. you could try adding words that help describe objects like looks like, sounds like and so on. I also thought Goldie locks was guilty. from India.

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  2. JasmineSeptember 24, 2021 at 1:55 PM

    Kia ora
    My name is Jasmine gi and I am in Room 9 at St Mary’s School in Gisborne.I really like how you highlighted your work to show us you achieved your success criteria.

    from Jasmine.gi

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  3. AlisonSeptember 24, 2021 at 2:03 PM

    kia ora bella
    My name is Alison from saint marys scool.I really like you high lighted your work to show us that you achieved your success criteria.You could try adding words that help describe objects like looks like, sounds like and so on.I also thought Golie Locks was guilty.From Alison

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