Monday, August 2, 2021

Bella's Holiday


Today I was learning how to use a hook sentence paragraphs dialog and to describe what we saw and how we felt.

I enjoyed how i got to right about my holiday

I found it challenging to do it in time


My digital learning object shows what I did in the holidays

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  1. IndiaAugust 3, 2021 at 10:19 AM

    Kia ora Bella
    My name is India and I am in Room 9 at St Mary’s School in Gisborne.

    I really liked your hook sentence.
    I learned that you got bored on Minecraft and went on fortnite.
    Maybe you could add a little more paragraphs and detail.

    From India.

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  2. JasmineAugust 3, 2021 at 10:23 AM

    Hi Bella maybe she just add a little bit more writing.from jasmine gi

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  3. JasmineNovember 30, 2021 at 9:21 AM

    Kia ora
    My name is Jasmine and I am in Room 9 at St Mary’s School in Gisborne.
    I think you should write how much the cupcakes are then people will know how much the cupcakes are.

    From Jasmine Gi

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