Today I was learning how to retell a story
I enjoyed how the elfs helped the shoe makers
I enjoyed how the elfs helped the shoe makers
I found it challenging to not chat with my friends
I found it challenging to not chat with my friends
My digital learning object shows some writing about the story
My digital learning object shows some writing about the story
Next time I would change how big my writing is
Next time I would change how big my writing is
Today I was learning how to retell a story
I enjoyed how the elfs helped the shoe makers .
I enjoyed how the elfs helped the shoe makers .
I found it challenging to not chat with my friends.
I found it challenging to not chat with my friends.
My digital learning object shows some writing about the story.
My digital learning object shows some writing about the story.
Next time I would change how big my writing is.
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Next time I would change how big my writing is.
Kia ora Bella
ReplyDeleteMy name is India and I am in Room 9 at St Mary’s School in Gisborne.
I really liked how you showed the background more.And gives more detail.
I learned that a husband and wife made shoes. And in the morning there was shoes were on the table. elves made shoes that night and they were watching.
Maybe you could put more full stops in. And maybe write a little more.
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